These are the shot times for my short film:
Opening title- 4 seconds
Shot 1- 14 seconds
Shot 2- 3 seconds (recently added in, not yet on storyboard)
Shot 3- 8 seconds (recently added in, not yet on storyboard)
Shot 4- 7 seconds
Shot 5- 8 seconds
Shot 6- 6 seconds
Shot 7- 9 seconds
Shot 8- 8 seconds
Shot 9- 5 seconds
Shot 10- 5 seconds
Shot 11- 6 seconds
Shot 12- 7 seconds
Shot 13- 8 seconds
Shot 14- 8 seconds
Shot 15- 4 seconds (recently added in, not yet on storyboard)
Shot 16- 8 seconds
Shot 17- 7 seconds (recently added in, not yet on storyboard)
Shot 18- 4 seconds (recently added in, not yet on storyboard)
Shot 19- 3 seconds
Shot 20- 10 seconds
Shot 21- 12 seconds (recently added in, not yet on storyboard)
Shot 22- 6 seconds
Shot 23- 5 seconds
Closing credits- 12 seconds
Thursday, 27 November 2014
Saturday, 22 November 2014
My Brother The Devil Analysis
My Brother The Devil is a social realism drama film which
was produced on the 9th November 2012 in the UK and filmed in Hackney,
London. It was directed and written by Sally El Hosaini who is also known for
her work on Green Zone and The Fifth Bowl. It was produced by Julia
Godzinskaya, Gayle Griffiths and Michael Sackler. The film has a running time
of 111 minutes and it has been classified as a fifteen due to sex, nudity,
violence, gore, profanity, alcohol, drugs and smoking. My Brother The Devil
stars James Floyd (Rashid- the older brother), Fady Elsayed (Mo- the younger
brother), Anthony Welsh (Izzi), Amira Ghazalla (Hanan) and Saïd Taghmaoui (Sayyid).
My Brother The Devil is about
two brothers, Rashid and Mo, who are British Arabs being brought up by an
Egyptian family and the effect that crime and gangs have on their relationship.
Mo looks up to and respects Rashid however Rashid does not want Mo to follow in
his footsteps and would prefer him to focus on his education because Rashid
leads a gang and finds himself caught up into the world of drug-dealing.; a
situation he does not want his younger brother to be involved in. Despite this,
Mo ignores Rashid’s requests and also becomes a drug dealer as well as becoming
under the influence of alcohol and drugs.
The narrative of this film fits in well with Robert McKee’s theory, named ‘story’, which states that a narrative consists of five main stages: inciting incident, progressive complication, crisis, climax and resolution. The inciting incident in my brother the devil is when Mo gets threatened by Demon and his gang and ends up having his shoes stolen from them. It is from this point that the film begins to truly develop because it causes conflict between Rashid’s and Demon’s gangs meaning the life of the main protagonists is changing in order for them to adapt to the plot. The progressive complication would be when Mo catches sight of Demon’s gang outside a local newsagent and in desperation, calls Rashid because he is in fear that he will be spotted and get attacked by them. This leads to Rashid and his gang confronting Demon’s gang and an intense fight breaks out almost immediately. The crisis occurs when Rashid’s best friend, Izzi gets stabbed during this fight and very sadly ends up passing away. I believe that this scene was purposely used in order to show to the audience the brutal realities of gang crime and the impact it can have on someone’s life, even when they least expect it. The film reaches a terrifying climax very close to the end when Rashid wants to get revenge on Demon’s gang, using a gun, and Mo accidently gets shot in the shoulder. This shocked Rashid to a great extent as he realised how close he was to losing his only brother so he makes the decision that everything has to change and he must re-think his actions. The resolution occurs when Mo and Rashid talk to each other alone, resulting in their friendship being restored and both of them having more peace and stability in their life.
Todorov’s narrative structure
theory also fits in well with the narrative of my brother the devil. His theory
also has five stages which are: equilibrium, disruption, realisation, repair
and return. The equilibrium is when Rashid is congratulating Mo on his exam
results and encouraging him to continue with his studies; there are no current
conflicts between the two main gangs. The
disruption is when Mo gets his shoes stolen from him. It is after this event
that the fight occurs between Rashid’s and Demon’s gangs which leads to the
death of Izzi. Rashid then comes to the realisation that what he is doing is
wrong so begins to have a re-think on how he should be spending his life. The
situation is repaired when Rashid meets a photographer named Sayyid and begins
to work for him. However, the narrative structure returns to a disruption when
Rashid has a sexual awakening and when Mo discovers this, he realises that he
has to face his own fears in order to protect Rashid and himself. This however,
does not lead to the return of a new equilibrium and instead results in another
disruption which is when Mo gets shot in the shoulder. The realisation of this
is when Rashid understands that what he is doing is wrong and that there must
be a change. Rashid repairs the disruption of the equilibrium by talking to Mo
alone which leads to balance and peace being restored within the family
therefore meaning the narrative has returned to a new equilibrium.
There is a wide variety of
very strong themes displayed throughout this film which are: family,
friendship, protection, control, violence, crime, hate, love, lust, betrayal
and revenge. The themes of family, friendship, love and hate are the most obvious
and they are clearly shown between Mo and Rashid because although they have a
big fall out in the film and claim to hate one another (“I wish you weren’t my
brother”), they still love and care for each other nonetheless and at the end,
they become friends again. Protection and control is shown through Rashid
because he does not want Mo to lead the same life as he does and therefore
demands him to focus purely on his studies. Protection is displayed when Mo
frantically calls Rashid when he spots Demon and his gang outside a shop. Rashid
drives to where Mo is extremely quickly and confronts Demon in order to reduce
the chances of Mo getting attacked. Violence and crime are expressed throughout
the entire film during events such as gang fights and drug dealing. I believe
that betrayal and revenge are two of the most important themes because they
play a very big part in the plot. Mo feels as if he has been betrayed by Rashid
when he rethinks his life plans after Izzi passed away and begins to work for
Sayyid. It is this disruption and realisation that eventually leads to Mo
coming very close to death. Revenge is shown when Rashid wants the final act of
violence between Demon’s gang and his own and decides to use a gun to do so. It
is this act of revenge that also leads to Mo being shot meaning that without
the themes of betrayal and revenge, the plot would not have been able to reach
that unexpected climax.
Mise-En-Scene was used effectively in order to create an urban environment which is very rough. The characters lived in an estate and this was clearly shown by the many establishing shots of towering, crowded flats. The flats were crowded and very close together to represent how the brothers, no matter how hard they tried, could not escape the crime that surrounded them and they constantly found themselves involved in situations such as gang fights. The small details such as graffiti on the walls enhanced the idea that the characters lived in a rough, run-down area and the characters would quite often be seen wearing costumes such as hoodies in order to blend in, stay out of the way and keep a low profile at times when they did not want to be easily noticed. Additionally, the protagonists having to live a life surrounded by crime and violence was highlighted by the use of props which included weapons such as knives and guns and other props such as alcohol, cigarettes and drugs. Mo felt pressurised to make use of these props in order to ‘fit in’ and be just like his older brother.
The cinematography was absolutely
outstanding and the beautiful still shots made Hackney seem like a better place
than it really is, possibly to represent how the protagonists wanted a better
life for themselves. However, these still shots were almost tilted and not
perfectly straight to represent how neither of the protagonist’s lives were completely
stable. There were also a lot of moving shots, for example, when a character
drank some alcohol, the camera would move upwards as they tilted the bottle
upwards, which made the sequence more realistic and also more interesting to
watch. I noticed that at times, slow motion camera action was used which allows
the audience to see the action that is taking place in more detail. The
frequent over the shoulder shots meant the audience could feel more involved
with what was happening and during fight scenes, point of view shots were used
which enabled the audience to be put in the characters shoes in order to feel
as if they were actually there. The use of low angle shots showed that the
character had power and dominance and therefore is in control and is more
superior than the other character(s) who is in turn portrayed as weaker and
more vulnerable.
The use of lighting was very effective throughout my brother the devil. Firstly, dark lighting was used when a character was trying to be secretive, for example, in the scene where Rashid sneaks a girl into the house at night to have sexual intercourse with her, the lighting is very dark and this is to represent how he does not want anyone in the house to see them which in turn, conveys mystery. Also, I noticed that when Mo and Rashid are together at the beginning and end of the film, the lighting is brighter than it is during the scenes in which they have fallen out. This is to symbolise their friendship as brothers and that when they are together, they immediately feel safer and much happier; this bright lighting is not used so often during the scenes in which they have fallen out to represent how their relationship has been torn apart.
I believe that non-diagetic sound was used
very creatively in order to create meaning. Music was used to fit the tone of
the atmosphere which in turn helped to make it more believable, for example,
dramatic music was used during intense scenes to leave the audience on the edge
of their seats, wondering what was going to happen next. A scene I clearly
remember that used sound artistically was when Mo asked Hanan what music she
was listening to and she gave him the headphones to listen for himself. When he
put the headphones on, the music that the audience could previously hear very
quietly became a lot louder and the surrounding sounds were muted out. This
meant the audience were put in Mo’s shoes and therefore were able to hear what
he could hear, making the scene more realistic and life-like. Additionally,
throughout the film I could often hear police sirens in the background which
emphasizes how Hackney is a very rough area with extremely high crime rates.
The performances were excellent because they were very natural so did not seem forced at all. They were all extremely powerful meaning it was easy for the audience to engage with each character, especially the main protagonists, Mo and Rashid, who Fady Elsayed and James Floyd did a brilliant job of playing. I have not seen Elsayed and Floyd act in any other films apart from my brother the devil so I was not expecting such outstanding performances to which there was very little fault.
From near to the middle of the
film and onwards, the plot developed strongly and it became clear that Mo and
Rashid were going opposite ways in their lives; parallel editing was used to
show this. There were certain scenes that showed what the two brothers were
doing at the same time via parallel editing in order to show their different
stories and also to represent how although they have been torn apart, they
still think about one another constantly. The use of parallel editing was very
clever because it created intensity and added more creativity and interest to
the scenes it was used in.
I think that the film is
called ‘my brother the devil’ because Mo did not obey Rashid’s request which
was to focus purely on his education and to not get involved with gangs, drugs
and alcohol therefore, he was being rebellious so is being referred to as a ‘devil’.
Overall, I really enjoyed my brother the
devil because it is a gritty film with miraculous cinematography, stunning
performances and strong themes. Each character was very well developed and I
was kept intrigued the whole way though; an outstanding film that I would
highly recommend to anyone.
Friday, 21 November 2014
Storyboard For My Short Film
Please note that the details on what happens in each shot are also noted on the 'outline' section on my previous post which will be clearer and easier to read. Since filming my short film, I have added and taken away some shots so I will make a new storyboard which shows these changes.
Thursday, 20 November 2014
Development Of My Short Film
Title: Remember
Character development:
Character development:
- The teenage girl- her name is Katie and she is 16 years old. She is very fashionable and enjoys listening to upbeat/pop music.
- The teenage boy- his name is Connor, he is 17 years old and he is the boyfriend of Katie. Connor has a very caring personality and enjoys keeping fit and healthy.
- The mother- her name is Jackie and she is middle-aged. We do not get to see much of her in the short film but from her reaction to Connor's death, the audience should be able to tell that she cared a lot about him.
Due to there being very limited dialogue within my short film, the audience will not hear the characters addressing one another using their names however their names will be shown in the end credits. This also means a script will not be needed because there is only one very short line at the end of the film.
Setting: The film will mainly be set outside during the daytime. My key places of shooting will be the bench, the park and the graveyard. There is one scene which is shot inside the house (when Katie finds out Connor has passed away) and the lighting will be slightly darker to represent that something bad has happened.
Outline: Before the film begins, the screen is black and the title of the film (remember) is written in a white font and "a short film by Jess Wood" is written below the title. This is to inform the audience on what the film is called and who made it. The music that the girl is listening to in the next shot will be heard in this opening sequence.
The first shot will be an establishing shot of Katie walking along the pavement and the camera will pan along with her as she walks. This shot is used to inform the audience on the environment that Katie is in. As she is walking, she is listening to pop music through her headphones which the audience will be able to hear. I am using music instead of dialogue because it effectively creates the desired mood and also the audience are put in the shoes of the character. The next shot is an over the shoulder shot of Katie who is still walking along the pavement. This shot is used to create a realistic effect meaning the audience can feel more involved with what is happening as they can see the surroundings from Katie's point of view.
There is then a long shot of Katie walking down the pathway to Connors house. This shot is used to introduce the audience to the new location and what her destination is. Within this shot, Katie gets out her keys to his house and removes her headphones and at this point, the music stops playing. Next is a close up of Katie unlocking the door in order to give a detailed account of what she is doing. Due to the pop music no longer playing, suspense is created. There is then an over the shoulder shot of Katie walking through the house and into the living room to find Connors mother crying. This shot is used so the audience can see the unexpected situation through Katie's eyes. There is no music at this point and the only sound the audience should be focusing on is the sound of Jackie crying.
Next is a mid shot of Jackie crying whilst holding a small framed image of Connor. This shot is used in order to show her emotions as well as the photograph so the audience begin to understand what has happened. Sad music then begins to play which is quiet at first and gradually gets louder. A close up is then used of the framed image to inform the audience on who has passed away and Jackie's hand is shaking, showing that she is very upset. There is then an extreme close up of Katie to show that she is shocked and devastated because she has realised what has happened. The camera will then pan backwards so the audience can see Katie running out of the room. This is followed by a long shot of the door to show Katie exiting the house and slamming the door behind her.
Next is a wide shot of Katie running towards a bench and sitting down on it; this is to inform the audience of the new environment. Then there is an over the shoulder shot of Katie sat on the bench, the camera will pan up towards the sky and when it pans back down, both Katie and Connor will be sitting on the bench followed by them walking off the bench holding hands. This is when the flashbacks will begin and reflective music fades in. A low angle shot followed by a high angle shot will be used to show Katie and Connor spinning around and looking into each others eyes. The low shot represents how Katie looked up to Connor and the high angle shot represents how Connor truly cared for Katie. We then get a wide shot of the couple on the swings followed by a mid shot of them walking across the field with their arms wrapped around each other. At one point, Connor will let go of Katie and walk off into the distance alone which represents how he has now disappeared from her life.
A wide shot is used to show Katie sitting on the bench alone- the flashbacks have ended. The reflective music then fades out and the original sad music fades back in as an over the shoulder shot shows Katie walking into a graveyard to visit Connors grave; "one year later" is written at the bottom of the screen to show that this is in the future. A mid shot then shows Katie placing flowers next to his grave, this shot is used so the audience can see her completing this action at the same time as seeing her emotions. The final shot is a close up of Katie to show a tear running down her face as she says: "I miss you" followed by the camera panning out to show more of the graveyard. The end credits will then fade in with the sad music still playing.
Running time: I believe I can make this short film under 5 minutes long because I will not show each individual shot for too long as I have used many different shot sizes and types so some may be a few seconds and some may last slightly longer.
The first shot will be an establishing shot of Katie walking along the pavement and the camera will pan along with her as she walks. This shot is used to inform the audience on the environment that Katie is in. As she is walking, she is listening to pop music through her headphones which the audience will be able to hear. I am using music instead of dialogue because it effectively creates the desired mood and also the audience are put in the shoes of the character. The next shot is an over the shoulder shot of Katie who is still walking along the pavement. This shot is used to create a realistic effect meaning the audience can feel more involved with what is happening as they can see the surroundings from Katie's point of view.
There is then a long shot of Katie walking down the pathway to Connors house. This shot is used to introduce the audience to the new location and what her destination is. Within this shot, Katie gets out her keys to his house and removes her headphones and at this point, the music stops playing. Next is a close up of Katie unlocking the door in order to give a detailed account of what she is doing. Due to the pop music no longer playing, suspense is created. There is then an over the shoulder shot of Katie walking through the house and into the living room to find Connors mother crying. This shot is used so the audience can see the unexpected situation through Katie's eyes. There is no music at this point and the only sound the audience should be focusing on is the sound of Jackie crying.
Next is a mid shot of Jackie crying whilst holding a small framed image of Connor. This shot is used in order to show her emotions as well as the photograph so the audience begin to understand what has happened. Sad music then begins to play which is quiet at first and gradually gets louder. A close up is then used of the framed image to inform the audience on who has passed away and Jackie's hand is shaking, showing that she is very upset. There is then an extreme close up of Katie to show that she is shocked and devastated because she has realised what has happened. The camera will then pan backwards so the audience can see Katie running out of the room. This is followed by a long shot of the door to show Katie exiting the house and slamming the door behind her.
Next is a wide shot of Katie running towards a bench and sitting down on it; this is to inform the audience of the new environment. Then there is an over the shoulder shot of Katie sat on the bench, the camera will pan up towards the sky and when it pans back down, both Katie and Connor will be sitting on the bench followed by them walking off the bench holding hands. This is when the flashbacks will begin and reflective music fades in. A low angle shot followed by a high angle shot will be used to show Katie and Connor spinning around and looking into each others eyes. The low shot represents how Katie looked up to Connor and the high angle shot represents how Connor truly cared for Katie. We then get a wide shot of the couple on the swings followed by a mid shot of them walking across the field with their arms wrapped around each other. At one point, Connor will let go of Katie and walk off into the distance alone which represents how he has now disappeared from her life.
A wide shot is used to show Katie sitting on the bench alone- the flashbacks have ended. The reflective music then fades out and the original sad music fades back in as an over the shoulder shot shows Katie walking into a graveyard to visit Connors grave; "one year later" is written at the bottom of the screen to show that this is in the future. A mid shot then shows Katie placing flowers next to his grave, this shot is used so the audience can see her completing this action at the same time as seeing her emotions. The final shot is a close up of Katie to show a tear running down her face as she says: "I miss you" followed by the camera panning out to show more of the graveyard. The end credits will then fade in with the sad music still playing.
Running time: I believe I can make this short film under 5 minutes long because I will not show each individual shot for too long as I have used many different shot sizes and types so some may be a few seconds and some may last slightly longer.
Wednesday, 19 November 2014
Das Boot Chosen Scene Breakdown: First Draft (Cinematography And Sound)
I have chosen to analyse a scene
from Das Boot which is called “Not Yet Kameraden”. Das Boot is a German war
film, directed and written by Wolfgang Petersen, which takes place during the Second World War and it follows the life of
the German soldiers on a U-boat in 1941. In the scene that I have chosen, the men
are attempting to raise the U-boat after it had been stuck 300 metres below the
ocean due to it being attacked by a British convoy.
The scene begins with a medium
wide shot of all the German soldiers on the U-boat cramped together as they
stare desperately at the depth meter. This shot is used to show the
horrendously claustrophobic conditions the men had to live in during their time
spent on the submarine and it also represents how they have all become very
close friends after the traumatizing events they have been through together. The lighting in this shot has a strong red
tint to it which symbolises danger therefore creating intensity because the
audience do not know what is going to happen next so are left at the edge of
their seats. The atmosphere is almost silent; all we can hear is the sound of
the men shuffling around quietly. The silence is used to show that the men are
concentrating and are almost afraid to speak because they are waiting for
something to happen.
The captain then instructs the
engineer to “blow all her tanks” and before the engineer does so, a medium
close up is used which shows him closing his eyes and taking a deep breath, as
if he is praying that everything is going to work out and that the U-boat will
be recovered. A medium close up is used in order to show these emotions and
also so the audience can see him blowing the tanks of the submarine. It then
cuts back to the medium wide shot of the men who are all breathing heavily and
looking extremely anxious and I feel that this was a very good shot to use because it shows that they all have their eyes intensively glued on the depth meter as
they are aware that this is there last opportunity to be saved. We then get
several extreme close ups of the depth meter and this shot is used in order to
inform the audience on what the men are seeing so it also serves as a point of
view shot as we are put in the men’s shoes and get a detailed account of their
visions.
There is an excellent use of cinematography in the following wide shot which shows the submarine underneath
the murky green water. Firstly, the colour green symbolises hope which
represents how the submarine has a good chance of rising. Secondly, the use of
the wide shot allows the audience to clearly see the setting and they are able
to see that the submarine is stuck between a rock which is one of the reasons
why it was struggling to rise. Suddenly, the submarine jolts and the men jump
at this unexpected movement causing the audience to jump with them. The
audience react in such a way because they feel very engrossed and involved with
the scene as they are also desperate for the U-boat to rise. Soon after, there is
another extreme close up to show the depth meter and this time, the meter is
moving upwards to which one of the Men say “she’s rising” followed by everyone
cheering excitedly for the first time in quite a while. This cheer triggers the
audience to feel immensely happy and relieved for the Men because they know
that this is the moment they have been waiting for. The shots then swap between
the wide shot of the submarine to see it rising, the extreme close up of the
depth meter to show it moving upwards and the medium shot of the men to show
that they are feeling relieved and reassured. In the background, violin music
is playing in which the pitch is gradually getting higher which symbolises
triumph and our hearts are racing because we want the U-boat to rise completely.
An establishing shot of the ocean
is then used to introduce the audience to the new setting which is above the
ocean as appose to below it. Victory music plays which increases in speed as
the U-boat rises to the top of the ocean. This is used in order to show the
immense power and strength of the U-boat because it has emerged from the
negativity that once prevented it from making any progress. A low angle shot is
then used to show the captain opening the roof of the U-boat and climbing up
and I believe this shot was purposely used to firstly show he has power over
the other men because only he can climb up and also to show strength and
victory because he, along with the other men, has defeated the almost
impossible. As soon as the captain opens the roof, water falls down on him
which is clearly refreshing and he is content to experience such a feeling; it
is as if he is climbing up to freedom and away from the danger within the
submarine which is still represented by the red lighting. Next, there is a
medium close up of the men which shows them huddled very tightly around the
opening and this is used to represent how they are all desperate for a breath
of fresh air. They are all breathing in as much air as they can which shows
they have missed pure oxygen, which is a necessity, and they are relieved to
have it back.
The camera is now in the engine
room and there is a medium wide shot of one of the engineers who has been given
permission to start the engines. The atmosphere is silent to show concentration
and before he does anything, the engineer looks behind his shoulder for
encouragement as he is afraid they will still not work after spending such a
long time trying to fix them. A medium wide shot is used so the audience are
able to see the body language of the engineer as well as his facial expressions
and also to give the audience an insight as to what the engine room looks like.
As soon as we hear that the engines are
working, a medium close up is used of the chief captain to clearly show that he
is very excited and he laughs with extreme relief and happiness and he cannot
stop smiling which is very effective resulting in the audience also feeling
very content and relieved.
The same triumphant music as what
was played previously is used in the background as the U-boat storms through
the ocean to symbolise achievement and the camera has a handheld feel to it as
it moves along with the waves in order to create a realistic effect. The shot shows strong waves splashing against the two men who are standing
on the deck of the submarine. This is used to represent that it is a fresh and
better start for them now that the U-boat is on the move. A very effective line
is used at the end of the scene which is performed excellently by the captain
because he says it in such a strong and believable voice. The line is: “not yet
kameraden, not yet!” which translates to: “not yet comrades, not yet!” and it
shows how the captain will not allow himself and the other crew members to be
defeated easily and how it would take a lot more in order to demolish them completely.
Tuesday, 18 November 2014
Initial Idea For My Short Film
Genre:
·
Drama
·
Romance
Cast:
·
Teenage girl
·
Teenage boy
·
A mother/Father or older brother/sister
·
(for the cast, I could use my friends and
family)
Basic plot:
It would begin with the teenage girl walking along the
pavement- she has her headphones in and we can hear the happy/upbeat music she
is listening to. She is on her way to her boyfriend’s house to give him a
surprise visit and when she arrives, the music stops as she takes off her
headphones. She lets herself into his house (she has a spare pair of his keys)
and all she can hear is someone crying hysterically. She walks into the living
room to find her boyfriend’s mum crying as she looks at a photograph of him.
Sad music plays as a close up shot shows this photograph and the girl realises
what has happened and she runs out of the house with tears running down her
face. She sits on a bench and then there would be a series of flashbacks to
show her and her boyfriend together- reflective music is playing and you can
hear the sound of them laughing in the background. The shot then goes back to
the girl sitting on the bench. The screen goes black and “1 year later” is
written on the screen in white letters. The next scene shows the girl walking
into a graveyard, kneeling down beside a grave as she places down some flowers,
there is a close up of her to show a tear running down her face and she would
say “I miss you (insert name here)”. The camera would then pan out to show the
whole of the graveyard along with the girl who is still beside the grave, sad
music is playing.
How I would make it:
I have friends and family members that I can cast for the
short film. I would be able to film it outside of the college because I live in
an area that has a graveyard nearby and also numerous benches. The flashbacks
can be filmed somewhere as simple as a park or just an open field.
Possible titles:
·
Remember
·
Memories
What the themes would be:
Devastation, love, mourning, reflection, anger and
helplessness. Films that share these themes are:
·
The Notebook (love, devastation)
·
Up (mourning, reflection, also has flashbacks)
·
Titanic (love, helplessness, devastation, based
on a true story)
·
Dear John (anger, heartbreak, love)
·
A Walk To Remember (reflection, devastation,
love)
·
The Fault In Our Stars (anger, helplessness,
unexpected turns, love, devastation, realistic)
The intended audience:
I would like it to be a teen audience, ranging from the ages
15-18 so the people are old enough to be mature when watching the film and are
able to understand what is going on as the narrative develops. The film is
aimed at both males and females however; I feel that females are more likely to
show more sensitivity towards the film so in turn are more likely to cry when
watching it. However, I do want the audience as a whole to be sensitive so they
are emotionally affected when watching this film and are able to display
emotions such as crying.
Therefore, the audience should have previously enjoyed films
that are realistic and cover the genre of romance in order for them to relate
more to this short film and engage to a greater extent with the characters. They
should have also enjoyed dramas, rom-coms and family films and are probably
less interested in watching horrors and thrillers.
What I am trying to tell my audience:
I am trying to tell them how different people may respond to
a death and how it still may have an impact on them in the future. Also how the
loss of a loved one can be unexpected so you should always appreciate your
loved ones, not take them for granted and to ‘live in the moment’.
How I will create meaning:
I will create meaning mainly through the use of music-
mostly sad and reflective music that will help the audience to engage more with
the characters and feel the emotions that they are feeling. Due to there being
limited dialogue, facial expressions will play a big part in the narrative
along with the cinematography. For example, when a character is crying there
would be a close up or extreme close up of them to show their emotions.
FM1 Written Analysis Proposal
The film I am writing
about: Das Boot
The scene I am using
from Das Boot: “Not Yet Kameraden”
Why I have chosen this
scene: I have chosen to analyse this scene because it is very meaningful
and I feel there is a lot of write about regarding: what it is about, how
meaning is created, the cinematography, sound, light, performance, themes,
editing and mise-en-scene. I also
believe that this scene is very high in emotion and is one of the most
memorable scenes in the film due to how genuine and heartfelt it is.
These are some points
that I could talk about and expand on in my analysis:
- First shot- mid of all the men cramped together- shows claustrophobic conditions.
- The red lighting symbolises danger so creates intensity.
- Silent atmosphere- concentration, they are waiting for something to happen.
- When the U-boat jolts, the men jump and so do the audience as we are so engrossed with the scene.
- Close up to show the meter rising- informs the audience on what the men are seeing.
- When it rises, the men cheer and we cannot help but feel happy and relieved with them.
- Music- pitch is getting higher which symbolises triumph- our heart is racing because we want the U-boat to rise completely.
- Heavy breathing- relieved, they are in shock of what has just happened.
- Establishing shot of the ocean- victory music plays which increases in speed as the U-boat rises to the top- shows its immense power and strength as it has emerged from the negativity that prevented it from making any progress.
- The captain opens the roof of the U-boat to climb up and water falls down on him- it is clearly refreshing and he is content to experience such a feeling, it is as if he is climbing up to freedom.
- Medium close up of the men very tightly huddled around the opening- they are breathing in as much air as they can which shows a necessity (pure oxygen) that they have missed and they are relieved to have it back.
- When one of the engineers is turning on the engines, he looks behind his shoulder for encouragement as he is afraid that they still will not work after spending such a long time trying to fix them.
- We hear that the engines are working- the chief engineer laughs with extreme relief and happiness and he cannot stop smiling which is very effective and the audience feel very content for him and the other men.
- Triumphant music as the U-boat storms through the sea, the camera moves along with the waves to create a realistic effect.
- Strong waves splash against the men- it is a fresh and better start for them now that the U-boat is up and running.
- Very effective line at the end of the scene: “not yet kameraden, not yet!” meaning “not yet comrades, not yet!”- This shows that they will not allow themselves to be defeated easily.
Thursday, 13 November 2014
Everything Is A Remix
I recently watched a four part documentary called 'Everything Is A Remix' which is written and mixed by Kirby Ferguson and these are the main points I picked up from each episode:
Part 1- the song remains the same
Part 1- the song remains the same
- The word remix means to combine or edit existing materials to produce something new.
- For remixing, you do not need expensive tools, a distributor or skills; anybody can do it.
- Covers are performances of other people's material, and knock-off's are copies that stay within legal boundaries. Covers and knock-off's are known as legal remixing.
Part 2- remix Inc
- Most box office hits rely heavily on existing material. For those films that are not 'remixes', the term 'genre films' is used to describe them. Genres are broken up into sub-genres which have there own. even more specific, conventions. For example, horrors have sub-genres of slasher, zombie and creature feature which all have standard elements that are appropriated, transformed and subverted.
- Films are built on other films, plays, graphic novels, actual events, toys, commercials, books and television shows. For example, Star Wars follows the outline of the Monomyth which consists of stages like the call to adventure, supernatural aid, the belly of the whale, road of trails and meeting with the goddess. Star Wars (1977) plays like a much more updated version of Flash Gordon (1936) and they share similarities such as the opening titles design.
- Creation requires influence- everything we make is a remix of existing creations, our lives and the lives of others.
Part 3- the elements of creativity
- Copying is how we learn, nobody starts out original. We need copying to build a foundation of knowledge and understanding.
- After copying, it is possible to create something new through transformations, taking an idea and creating variations.
- The most dramatic results can happen when ideas are combined.
- The basic elements of creativity are: copy, transform and combine.
- The interdependence of our creativity has been obscured by powerful cultural ideas but technology is now exposing this connectivity.
- Multiple discovery is the same innovation emerging from different places.
- "We're all building with the same materials"
- "Progress happens when all the factors that make for it are ready, and then it is inevitable"
Part 4- system failure
- Social evolution- copy, transform and combine. It is who we are, how we live and how we create. Our new ideas evolve from the old ones and social evolution is up to us.
- Ideas are layered, interwoven and tangled.
- Original creations can not compete with the price of copies.
- The gains we get from copying the work of others do not make a big impression but when it is our ideas being copied, we get territorial.
- When we copy, we justify. When others copy, we vilify. Most of us have no problem with copying as long as we are the ones doing it because we believe that ideas are property.
Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed everything is a remix and I was kept interested the whole way through. I was shocked to discover how many songs and films in particular are just copies and now I feel as I have more knowledge on the topic of remixes. My favourite episode was part 2 because it focused on film and it was fascinating to see how many comparisons just one film can have.
Sunday, 2 November 2014
Dirty Pretty Things Review
Dirty Pretty Things is directed by Stephen Frears, written by Steven Knight and produced by Robert Jones and Tracey Seaward in partnership with BBC Films and Celador Films. It is a 2002 British thriller (classified as a 15) released on the 13th December 2002 with a runtime of 97 minutes. It also covers the genres of drama and mystery, with a sub-genre of social and urban realism. The film was given a budget of $10,000,000 and it was filmed in the UK, in Shepperton studios and London.
(Spoiler alert) Starring Chiwetal Ejiofor (Okwe), Audrey TauTou (Senay
Gelik), Sergi López (Juan), Sophie Okonedo (Juliette), Benedict Wong (Guo Yi)
and Zlatko Buric (Ivan), Dirty Pretty Things is an intelligent film packed with
suspense, drama and compassion which is bound to keep you interested the whole
way though. Okwe, an illegal Nigerian immigrant struggles to face the
adversities of living in the underworld of London whilst having to tackle two
jobs, a cab driver by day and a hotel receptionist by night. He chews khat; an
illegal herb used to keep him awake and only gets a few hours of sleep during
the day on Senay’s couch who illegally works as a chambermaid in the same
hotel. However, everything changes when Okwe finds a human heart blocking the
toilet in one of hotel rooms and when he delves deeper into the situation, he
discovers something much more dire and malevolent behind the crime. Juan, the
boss of the hotel, is in charge of an illegal scheme which involves selling
human organs in exchange for passports. Meanwhile, Senay has had her job taken
away from her by the officials working in the immigration service so seeks help
from Okwe in order for her to run away and join her Cousin in America. However,
Okwe refuses to act as a surgeon in Juan’s scheme so she turns to Juan himself
who agrees to exchange her kidney for a passport but only if she would have
sexual intercourse with him to which Senay reluctantly agrees. After hearing of
this, Okwe informs Juan that for safety purposes, he would perform the operation
on Senay under the promise that Juan would provide them both with new passports
under different names. The narrative then takes an unexpected plot twist when
the two protagonists drug Juan and remove his kidney instead, a cunning plan
which resulted in both Okwe and Senay returning to their desired countries.
Steven Knight, through Dirty Pretty Things, shows the
underworld of London that we overlook and the side to it that does not have our
well-known landmarks and how much of a social and economic struggle it is to
survive in such an area. There is a particular scene that stood out for me
during the film in which Okwe, Senay and Juliette hand Juan’s kidney to their
business partner in return for passports. The man asks them, “how come I’ve
never seen you people before” to which Okwe responds, “because we are the
people you do not see”. I believe that this quote is very powerful and
meaningful because it shows that throughout this film, the audience are able to
hear and see the stories of immigrants such as Okwe who struggle to live in
such an ugly world, and it is people like him who we do not see. We learn how
awfully they are treated and how they are constantly trying to be exploited by
society, leaving them desperate for freedom. This quote links in with the
representation of the kidney near the beginning of the film. It represents Okwe
and other immigrants because a kidney is invisible from the outside which represents
how immigrants are practically invisible in our world and often go unseen. However, a kidney is also an organ that is of a great necessity which represents how immigrants are crucial in helping to create a stable balance within our economy.
Dirty Pretty Things explores the themes of love, crime, revenge, helplessness, escape and determination. Love is shown as Senay loves Okwe however, Okwe does not feel the same towards her because he wishes to stay loyal to his morals. Crime is a theme because many illegal acts are shown throughout the film such as Juan’s kidney exchange scheme and also the fact that the two main protagonists of the film (Okwe and Senay) are illegal immigrants. Revenge is shown when Okwe tricks Juan into having his kidney removed in return for himself and Senay receiving passports. Helplessness is shown quite frequently for example, when the officials force themselves into Senay’s home and search through her belongings, treating them as if they are worthless and Senay is frightened and helpless, hoping that they do not find something that will get her into major trouble. The themes of escape and determination are constantly emphasized throughout the whole film because Okwe and Senay are desperate to live a better life outside of London and they are willing to do anything it takes in order to escape, which they both eventually get to do at the very end of the film.
The performances were strong and effective; I felt a connection with a lot of the characters, especially with the leading pair. Chiwetal Ejiofor in particular offered a beautiful performance because he was able to keep his character original and realistic and the emotions that he expressed were very heartfelt. These stunning performances in turn really helped to enhance the narrative and created a storyline that was touching and emotionally moving. Additionally, the Mise-En-Scene helped to create characters that were realistic looking regarding their circumstances. They wore average clothes which showed how they were trying to ‘fit in’ so they would not get easily singled out by an official. Also, Okwe and Senay were made to look constantly exhausted and helpless due to long working hours and their desire to be free.
The cinematography in Dirty Pretty Things was very
impressive and I believe that sound played one of the most important roles in
the film. During intense scenes, dramatic music was used which started off slow
then picked up its pace in order to create suspense. To me, the music sounded
almost like a heartbeat which represents how the character was anxious and
scared because all the audience could hear was ‘their heart’ pounding very
fast. Okwe only worked at the hotel during the night so the scenes that were
shot at the hotel were quite dark at times which links back to the narrative
because extremely dark acts were carried out within the hotel (organ
exchanges). This helped to create a mysterious atmosphere which informed the
audience that something was not right. Dirty Pretty Things was filmed in London
however in places that we probably have not seen before; so many establishing
shots are used to introduce us to the unknown. I also noticed that a lot of POV
shots were used meaning we were able to see the world through the characters
eyes which makes the scene more realistic. This also means we are able to
engage and sympathize more with the characters because we are put in their shoes
and forced to share the same experiences as them. Of course, many close ups
were used to give the audience a deeper insight into what was being shown and
also to display the emotions of the characters, for example a close up is used
of Okwe at the end of the film to show a tear running down his face, informing
us that he is upset as he may not see Senay ever again.
Overall, I really enjoyed this Dirty Pretty Things because it displayed a lot of originality and I felt intrigued the whole way through. The cinematography and performances were almost flawless and I felt strongly connected with the main characters. The themes and messages within the narrative were extremely powerful and they helped me to understand the major difficulties of living as an immigrant in a big City such as London.
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